I have included the title and highlights from the blog post:
Nine Signs of an Effective Blog Post
Written on 7/10/2008 at 6:00 am by Darren Rowse
and applied them to the following blog post by tim@altsolarandwind.com. Here's the URL for the blog I reviewed:
1. The headline draws the reader in.
The headline is interesting but doesn't really address what the body of the blog is about.
2. A concrete detail or visual illustrates the benefit promised in the headline.
There is no visual illustration which would be helpful to those that are not familiar with PV or CSP. Maybe you don't know what PV or CSP mean either...
3. The lead expands the theme of the heading
It talks a lot about what’s going on with solar power in South Africa and sources of partial financing but doesn’t clearly expand on them.
4. The layout is clear and skim-able.
It is one big paragraph with not delineation of important sub-topics by using ALL CAPS, BOLD, underlining, OR LARGER TEXT.
5. The post covers the topic in a logical sequence.
Similar to #3 above. All over the place with no logical sequence. The blog talks about funding, Siemens’ interest in the CSP project, South Africa’s Integrated Resource Plan, but doesn’t really tie them together in a logical manner. There are topics for 3 or 4 blogs wrapped into this one blog.
6. The post is persuasive.
Doesn’t persuade me to do anything. The author does not get to a point. I’m more confused about alternative power in South Africa and because it is so far away and he’s made no social case, I don’t really care to investigate further.
7. The post is interesting to read.
No in the least. I think (she) tries but misses the “hook” several times.
8. The post is believable.
Nope. There are no credentials for the original post author (authors Sandy and/or Phil Smulian) and the credentials for the re-poster are not very impressive. He sounds like an avid solar / wind power enthusiast that has collected a lot of links in resources. I may hold onto the site just for the resources
9. The post asks for some action.
Nope. Don’t really understand the intent of the post. I’m not moved to do anything but maybe check out some of the resource links that are on the site.
I’d say that is 0 for 9 in the Effective Blogging category…what baseball would call a “no hitter”.